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Hate! I feel inside myself
Hate! Want to kill you all
Hate! Rip apart your limbs
Hate! Ever still I stall

Broke inside, I can not feel
Push me down you make me kneel
Rage inside, I didn't want to know
Can't let it out, when you make me blow

Pain! I feel inside my heart
Pain! Feelings on a shelf
Pain! Siblings need a dad
Pain! So it's kept to myself

Broke inside, I can not feel
Push me down you make me kneel
Rage inside, I didn't want to know
Can't let it out, when you make me blow

Fear! I feel inside my gut
Fear! Thought you wouldn't dare
Fear! When you rip my clothes
Fear! Now they just don't care

Broke inside, I can not feel
Push me down you make me kneel
Rage inside, I didn't want to know
Can't let it out, when you make me blow




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The following comments are for "The Nightly Game"
by Gami

Strong..
I feel a heap'n'dose of negativity
in this lyric.

A lot of strong hurtful meanings. This
person must feel a lot of pain..

I liked these lines...

I feel inside myself
I don't want to know
I can not feel
When you rip my clothes

I feel inside
My feelings on a shelf
you make me kneel
when you make me blow

I liked it...Cool......Mouse




( Posted by: Raejon [Member] On: May 17, 2004 )





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