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No birds chirping.
noise on temporary cease.
soft wind hitting cream
shades.
night creeping through the
open door.
10:00 pm
Outside of my apartment
In Valencia California
All things quiet.

No cars racing by.
Ocean clinching to the shore
for dear life.
Thick gentle mist wrapping itself
around stucco walls.
3:00 am
Outside of my hotel room
In Puerto Nuevo, Mexico
All things quiet.

Resting with ease.
The responsibility of everyday life
non existent.
Eyelids heavy from excessive
thinking.
Slowly slipping into the white faced
coma.
12:00 am
Inside of my mind
All things quiet.





------
redub


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The following comments are for "silence"
by redub

Nice
I am a fan of this one! Makes me want to go to Puerto Nuevo. Itís been too long........

( Posted by: EverybodyElsesGirl [Member] On: May 17, 2004 )





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