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Sleep my child

Sleep tonight,

Away from the harsh daylight

Let Morrigan’s raven wings

Spin dark dreams for your delight.



Shadowed moon and

Haunting wolf howl melodies

Spirits dancing and singing

To the night birds’ orchestra



Sleep my child

Sleep tonight,

The darkness breathes softly

A soothing lullaby

So dream and be rested

Till dawn draws nigh.

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The following comments are for "Dark Lullaby"
by De`esse

dark indeed, and... ?
Well, it's a kinda dark, but still a fresh and gentle piece... I find nothing very special in this, cause just words differentiate this song from standard, so-called-nice and sweet lullabies. You could strive to be more original.

( Posted by: Nightraven [Member] On: April 8, 2004 )





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