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The hate within...
Burns within my soul,
Toils with my heart,
Captures my very last breath,
Gradually rips me apart.

The sorrow within...
Disturbs the happy.
Distress cant take over me.
My eyes that once allowed a clear vision
Are now crossed with tears.

The death within...
Takes away my everything;
I have nothing to live for.
Hate and sorrow is all I am.
I dont want this anymore.

The fear within...
Will keep me here.
I dont have the strength I need.
I dont need to escape, I need to believe,
In all I am; hate, sorrow, death, and fear.



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