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Naue's voice came through the comm link. Tyfer jumped awake, for he had been knocked out since the crash on Hecrant. Hecrant was a Layt controled planet, fortunatly for Tyfer he crashed in the city of Frotther. An ancient city, where the Great Battle took place.

Kelks surrounded the Wild Karrade. Tyfer was drowsy from the crash. All talking excitedly. The cockpit open with a hiss. Tyfer stood up, to meet only but Dr.Naue. He looked around slowly. Great temples stood in place of fallen ones.

"Tyfer, listen. We've been traced and Layt ships are coming for us", explained Naue.

"Right, but I need a new ship". He looked at the Wild Karrade as he talked.

"Dont worry. These Kelks have a ship for you".

Minutes later, Tyfer was in the air, in the Knocker 5. It was a fast ship, with the same weapons as the Wild Karrade.

"Tyfer, watch for-never mind, here they come!"

Naue was in the Knocker 3. He fired a wave of lasers annialating 2 Kits. Tyfer fired at a squad coming right at him and destroyed the one in front. whunk whunk whunk. Went the lasers from the Kits.

"I'm hit", exclaimed Naue. "Escape while you can, Tyfer".

"Naue, I ca-"

"Go n-Ahhhhhhh!"

Tyfer looked down and saw the Knocker 3 spin out of control and smash into the ground. Tyfer watched as his friend got out and fired at the incoming fighters with a laser pistol.

"You'll never take me alive, Layt!"
whunk whunk whunk

Tyfer spun the ship around to face a Kit. Then he fired, wiping it out. He turned and fired and fired. whunk whunk whunk. Tyfer decimated about seven more, before retreating into space.

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