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Mummy only asked
In a polite way
About the next holiday

If you could take
Her away
To somewhere
That she had
never been

And you
In your daddy way

The kitchen

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The following comments are for "We know she can't cook"
by Uzzy

a lark, not the bird
Funny poem... I laughed and had to read it twice. Thanks for the chuckle, it was sorely needed.

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: May 15, 2004 )

Hysterical vignette!
He sounds like my husband: Dry humor. Short and sweet! Great punch line!

( Posted by: MaxiiJ [Member] On: May 15, 2004 )

I agree with hazel and Maxi: funny stuff! Keep it comin'!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: May 15, 2004 )

good fun in poems is too rare. As are smiles. Thanks for this one.

( Posted by: SamPark [Member] On: May 15, 2004 )

that's a four letter all of the house that's the room I hate the most...although I've been told by my kids that I make killer ya think they are trying to tell me something?
I just loved this poem....I'd rather be laughing

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: May 16, 2004 )

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