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A feeling
Of heavy eyes
Is nudging
As I sit by
The glowing logs
This cold night

That not-alone
Turns my head
To the door

That creaks
And slowly
The hinges squeak
And ache

I bolt upright
And admit
To being curious
And scared

And calmed
In the instant
The cold and damp
Frail fur paw
pats the door
And my heart

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The following comments are for "Only until the rain has gone"
by Uzzy

very nice poem and well-written. keep up the good work. love to read more of your stuff.

( Posted by: sierramuse8 [Member] On: May 14, 2004 )

Kickass poem! I loved the twist at the end!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: May 14, 2004 )

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