Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
10

(2 votes)


RatingRated by
10MaxiiJ
10rosebud

You must login to vote

I still see you,
a backdrop behind my dreams
and my nightmares,
your face drawn in long distaste.

My voice calling
still drops into your silence.

------
Roxanne Smolen
www.roxannesmolen.com



Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "From The Ruins"
by Starscapeviews

congratz!
(My voice calling
still drops into your silence)....I loved these two lines, great lines...congratz!

( Posted by: rosebud [Member] On: May 13, 2004 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: