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Sunset on the beach
whitewash dancing at my feet
as the day retreats

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The following comments are for "From the shore I see.."
by Raejon

this is a very enjoyable haiku, a wonderful use of imagery...I could see the setting sun, and feel the cold water lapping at my feet...wonderfully done

( Posted by: Reba [Member] On: May 13, 2004 )

really good
great haiku. could see my standing on the beach, barefoot in the sand as the water is rushing over my toes. well done.

( Posted by: cassandra [Member] On: June 2, 2004 )

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