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To Ms. Beth Castillo, for her May 30th Wedding Day


Your feet are the utter frailty
Things sensible and sensing
Try to unfasten them; they’re fashioned after flight:
Prodigious wings to carry dreams aloft

Your eyes are mundane
Since you see things sensibly
But watch sunrise and sunset photographs differently:
Countless and old and dark and strong and sad

Your chests rise and fall
It doesn’t make sense at all
The heavy collision of your seasons:
As age goes, in love, no secret can tarnish Beauty

Your mind wanders
Nostalgia knows beyond all senses
Say goodbye to trivial contemplations:
Out of your tough highway, without walking

Forget your utter feet,
Live the miraculous life, and
Just fly with those dreams.



------
Be daring, be different, be impractical, be anything that will assert integrity of purpose and imaginative vision against the play-it-safers, the creatures of the commonplace, the slaves of the ordinary. -- Sir Cecil Beaton (1904-1980) English photographer


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The following comments are for "Journey Beyond Bliss and Sojourn"
by Idomis

Wow!
Idomis;
I said it once, and I'll say it again, passion, just passion in your remarkable pieces of work. Thanks for a great read.

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: May 12, 2004 )





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