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I built walls of self-containment.
Imprisoned myself within a cage.
Years of fury and hostility,
until your love ended my rage.

I was left cold and alone.
Unwanted, and consumed by self-hate.
Years of neglect and abuse,
until your heart unlocked my gate.

I still fight the demons inside,
but my re-born spirit has strength anew.
Years of bruises and scars,
are finally healing, because of you.


Dedicated to my loving husband


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The following comments are for "Because of You"
by Reba

Very Emotional
Reba;
Short and right to the point...
"But I can identify with what you once went through, because I went through that years ago, like you, until someone tore down the walls to get to my heart."
"Then, God sent me through a healing process." I enjoyed the read.


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: May 11, 2004 )

Because of you...
Reba- This was so BEAUTIFUL!! What a wonderful thing to break down those walls, now we all get to enjoy your words, I thank your husband too!

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 11, 2004 )

because of you
Very touching
How tender your words are…
Thanks for your loving husband who made jot down these great feelings of gratitude…

fairgrace

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: May 12, 2004 )

because
thank you for your comments :) ...it is so hard to find words to describe such feelings, but words are what I have to work with, so I did my best ;) I am truly blessed and greatful to have this love in my life, and to be able to give it in return...thanks for reading
Reba

( Posted by: Reba [Member] On: May 13, 2004 )

Wonderful Men
Wonderful men who are willing to break down the walls and walk into our hearts. I have someone like that in my life, and all I can say is, your poetry hits me right in the heart. You said you wanted to write a novel...if you ever do...please let me know!!! This was very moving...brought back a load of memories.

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: October 15, 2004 )





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