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Waking up this morning with the sun shining in my abode
Wish my inner self was as litup as my room
But dark and murky clouds have set in about to rain
Wish the sun would erase this numb yet grieving pain

I feel as if destiny has resigned from her dutiful job
And lady luck has taken a long vacation
Fate, I am unsure of his whereabouts
And therfore I am left to make my own

But try and try not.....I am working hard
Hard but not very hard
Tardiness is a very good friend of mine
when Hard work has decided to abandon me at this difficult time.

So hear I am writing for all you to hear
Work hard to make life be what you want it to be
Rely not on fate, luck or good old destiny
For they will only assist you if you assist thee.

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