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My head has space for thoughts........
Open lines waiting for wet ink......
These last few months have brought changes.....
I’m left with the time to think....about you
life has grounded for now....left me in a place that’s
Content......... until....
Cleaning up ( my room )
Came across postcards........from the edge.
The edge of my life that was months back.
Picture of a beautiful girl sitting in a window
in new orleans....that smile trying to seep through The camera lens.
Pictures...more pictures..........
Picture of a girl sitting on my couch.....with a smile that
Could have you floating on clouds.
If you look close enough.....you can hear.....
The sound of intoxicating giggles echoing From her mouth....... hitting your ear drum with The sweet taste of heaven.
Life has grounded for now....left me in a place that’s
Content.......until.....
Cleaning up ( my living room )
Post it notes........with words of love
“ have a good day at work “
” i love you “
Post it notes......more notes
” thanks for the sun flower”
“ had a great weekend”
Wishing those were fresh thoughts
Fresh ink
new paper.
These last few months have brought changes.....
I’m left with time to think.....about you
This poem will soon end.
This day will get better.
Cleaning up ( my mind )
Remembering good times.
Laughing with and at you.
For 8 months i had a soul mate ( i had a soul mate )
I had love in my heart for a great person.
My head has space for thoughts........
Open lines waiting for wet ink......
These last few months have brought changes.....
I’m left with the time to think....about you
life has grounded for now....left me in a place that’s
Content......... until....












------
redub


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The following comments are for "just a thought"
by redub

Just a thought...
Rich, I loved this, especially "wishing those were
fresh thoughts, fresh ink, new paper." What a terrific thought. Things like that have gone through my mind, time and time again.

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 11, 2004 )

Fresh ink
I love this one. My favorite line "wishing those were fresh thoughts." Great job. Thanks for sharing sir!

( Posted by: everybodyelsesgirl [Member] On: May 11, 2004 )

awwww
this is such a moving poem. you must realy love who ever this is about. there is so much Imagery in your work that i feel like i'm in side your head. don't stop writting

( Posted by: darkfairy [Member] On: April 16, 2005 )





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