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I wrote this lyric as I was completely inspired by Majnona’s “be my lover”
It is also derived from her “cup of tea” as its initial line is starting so.
For Li & Im.

She said to him
“ Over a cup of tea
I want to meet you
Set together beside the sea
Look above, the sky is blue”

He replied
“ And I will sing the song I wrote you once
Then I will rise up
To share you the dance”


“Hold me tight and never drop”
“My heart beating for you will never stop”

“But I hear the music is about to end
And the sea is rolling because of the wind”

“The sun is setting away”
“But you for me …..will you stay?”

They stand together over the warm sand
He comes closer, holding her hand
Looking at each other, face to face
He whispered the most enchanting “yes”


May 4



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The sweet is never as sweet without the sour, and I know the sour which allows me to appreciate the sweet.



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The following comments are for "most enchating"
by fairgrace

Well done
I liked this lyric Fairgrace.
This's my favorite piece..

They stand together over the warm sand
He comes closer, holding her hand
Looking at each other, face to face
He whispered the most enchanting “yes”

Best wishes...Mouse..

( Posted by: raejon [Member] On: May 8, 2004 )

Nice.
I love the setting. You really bring out the ambience in this piece. From a cup of tea, to two star crossed lovers on the sands. Cool

( Posted by: Broken [Member] On: May 8, 2004 )





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