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This is the third of three poems i have written recently. Thanks to those who have commented. This gives more confidence to share my older poems as well so keep an eye out for them.( Sorry for grammatical or speeling errors, I write poetry but i am not very good in the partculars of writing)

Perfect
I know you are not perfect.
Don't try and prove that you aren't,
love blinds us,
you know this.
Sometimes it may look,
like i think you are perfect.
I know you aren't,
but sometimes i think you are .
Don't knock yourself down.
Don't make a point not to be
but just be yourself
let me make the judgement.

------
Blackbird sing in the dead of night. Take these broken wings and learn to fly.All your life.
-john lennon and Paul McCartney


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The following comments are for "Perfect"
by P.B. Hedwig

i like this
i really like it. i read it over a couple of times and got a something new each time. i like that type of stuff. good job :)

( Posted by: Veruca Salt [Member] On: February 17, 2002 )

thanks
veruca,
Thank you so much for the comment. I am glad you got so much out of it. Means alot to me that other people like what i write.
-P.B. Hedwig

( Posted by: P.B. Hedwig [Member] On: February 18, 2002 )

Veruca
Yeah, Veruca Salt is always cool like that. She was the first (and as far as i know, ONLY) stranger to comment on one of my works, my song, Angelic. But seriously, i find this poem rather interesting. Just curious, is it about who i think it is?

( Posted by: E.G. Evans [Member] On: February 18, 2002 )

Yep, it is good
Nicely done P.B. I've actually read this a few times myself and thought it was better each time.

Parteepants

( Posted by: Richard Dani [Member] On: February 18, 2002 )





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