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Another poem for you to endure
Like it matters to you anymore
Those of you who have fallen off the earth
Our friendship is what you donít want anymore
Our friendship is what you hate most
Empty promises
To you Iím meaningless
Your lies are crippling
To you Iím nothing
To me you are bliss
To you i'm what you donít miss
To our past is meaningless
To me itís everything but this
You said this would never end
You lied
All because of me
Sunshine on your side
Darkness on mine
Once you said love
Now you donít give a fuck
To me itís an end
To you itís nothing
Where were you while I was shivering cold?
Apparently to you;
This is getting old!

-End Transmission-

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