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Love, Hate, Happiness, Sadness,
what is the difference,
Love only leads to pain,
pain only lead to hate,
happiness only leads to despair,
despair only leads to sadness,
does it matter if I can only hate, does it matter if I can no longer see love,
does anything matter,
there is no difference from love to hate,
the is harsh and may not be believed by some,
some may say love and happiness go hand to hand,
other may say hate and sadness dwell in the same house,
I say that these people have never loved or hated in there life,
maybe this person is better off in the end,
maybe this person does not love because it is to painful to feel love,
Does this mean I will never know what love, hate, happiness, or sadness again,
not unless I lost my heart,
my heart is my curse with no known cure.

Jeffrey Lawson

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