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for the lover non exitant in my current life:

I wrote this for you
In deep contemplation
What is it that I adore?
Miles and miles apart
Away from the phone
Other methods fail to exist
Youíre just like me
The way it is
Nothing perfect
You make me high
As high as an airplane
You make me laugh
With your sarcasm
Hearing your voice
Over came by nothing but excitement
One night itís your turn
Tomorrow night is mine
One fight over another
Youíre all that matters
Itís your insight I adore
Miles and miles away
To touch, to smell, to kiss
Miles and miles away
What is it that you adore?
You have stripped me of my pain
Thinking of you
Itís everything but a bore
Miles and miles away!
It is you I adoreÖ



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