Memory
by mkminion (Member) - published: May 3, 2004
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Category - Poetry
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We'll make a memory,
you and I,
and then I'll be on my way.
There's no time for lonely moments now.
In a day I'll be far away.
So wish on me while I'm here,
and I'll be your falling star.
I'll kiss you goodnight
and whisper to life
every dreamer's dream you feel.

We'll make a memory,
you and I,
and then I'll be on my way.
We’ll dance without rhythm,
Seducing each other with
Involuntary movements and
Awkward auditory phrasing.
I’ll wish on you while I’m here,
And you’ll be my falling star.
I’ll kiss you goodnight
And you’ll whisper to life
The truth that I don’t want to go.

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Comments

The following comments are for "Memory"
by mkminion

Nice!
I really like the imagery in this poem. I can feel the pain and confusion, and it is something easy for the reader to identify with. Good job :)

( Posted by: blightedstar [Member] On: May 3, 2004 )

Memories
Very nice poem. Easy to relate to, for anyone who's had to leave someone. Thanks for the read.

( Posted by: Everybodyelsesgirl [Member] On: May 3, 2004 )

..Yup
"We'll make a memory,
you and I"

Very nice line indeed. Loved it.

( Posted by: Pawn [Member] On: May 3, 2004 )

Memory
I loved it. It was surprising when the last line was your wish to stay. It brought to mind an old Wayne Newton song about moving on.

( Posted by: Dfortyseven [Member] On: June 7, 2005 )

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