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I got lost looking out the window
waiting for you to walk right by
i got lost looking out my window
trying to find myself again
I got lost looking out the window
seeing each day blow right by
i got lost looking out my window
just seeing myself eye to eye................... All mind quakes
Have afterthoughts
Slipping......
Slipping........
I started to get up
As you went down Heart in my face as i fell to the ground.
You captured my heart
As quick as could be
The things that would come
I just couldn't see.
I've never seen an angel
Until i saw your face
The most beautiful creature in the
Whole human race. I started to get up
As you went down
Heart in my face as i fell to the ground.



------
redub


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The following comments are for "Lost"
by redub

Mind quakes
My favorite lines "all mind quakes, have afterthoughts." Nice job. Would like to hear it sung one day!!

( Posted by: Everybodyelsesgirl [Member] On: May 3, 2004 )

Lost...
You may have been lost but you sure did an awesome job in being found! This is excellent. Please keep writing. I will be looking for your work!!

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 7, 2004 )





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