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Like the words you never heard
I am living that disturbed
I don't know that the things you said
All I know, you should be dead

Things don't seem right in here
Tears are falling through the year
As I said just go away
Destroy it each and everyday

Breaking down a second time
Breaking down a stupid rhyme
Breaking down the words no sense
Breaking down the innocence

Time...
Don't follow in the style
Time...
I want to go home now

Destruction of the second class
Stay away and it might pass
Fighting of the upmost sound
Beating to the simplest ground

I don't know just anymore
Why don't you just shut the door?
Jumping - breaking all the pace
Treading through the toughest race

Breaking down a second time
Breaking down a stupid rhyme
Breaking down the words no sense
Breaking down the innocence

Time...
Don't follow in the style
Time...
I want to go home now

Time...
Don't follow in the style
Time...
Where is my home now?

Breaking down a second time
Breaking down a stupid rhyme
Breaking down the words no sense
Breaking down the innocence

Time...
Don't follow in the style
Time...
I want to go home now

Where is my home now?

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Pushing a lover to love another. Are you turned on?


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The following comments are for ""Time""
by Tyrant Monkey

Monkey Songs
I haven't given any feedback in the past because it's so hard without music. So seldom do the words alone do anything for me. I typically like the sound of the song first and then discover the words. Doing it the other way around is hard at best. I do think this one has interesting lyrics and only wish I could hear how it would sound set to music.

I just hope its not a country song...

( Posted by: Jeff [Member] On: February 13, 2002 )

songs
Tyrant Monkey,

I really like the way that the words are set and can almost hear the beat in my mind. So I beleive that when these words are put to music they will make up an awesome song... I don't think "Time" is a country song though (hopefully not), but then I may not be the best judge I might just think that because I was listening to rock while I was reading it.

Later,
Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: February 13, 2002 )

Heck naw..
Heck no! This aint a country song. Hey, thanks for the comments. I appriciate them all.

( Posted by: Tyrant Monkey [Member] On: February 15, 2002 )

lyrics
I agree that this is an absolutely wonderful song. This song displays the gift of using reoccuring words or phrases. Listeners tend to get a sense of confort from certain patterns in songs, like knowing what the next word will be even if they've never heard the songs. But i also like the little variations you threw in.

It is always kinda hard interpreting or judging just lyrics. But i also think they can be better analyzed better without the distraction of the music. I have heard countless songs where great lyrics were wasted on porrly composed music. I have also heard (and sometimes written) lyrics that were shit but the music bailed them out. But lyrics have always been more important to me, and these lyrics are great.

( Posted by: E.G. Evans [Member] On: April 1, 2002 )

Sorry about that.
Didn't realize anyone was still posting on my song. E.G., I want to thank you for your comment. I'm glad to see that you like the repetative style I used.

( Posted by: Tyrant Monkey [Member] On: April 20, 2002 )

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I have to say that this was quite good. Is it put to music or anything? If it isn't I think it should be.

( Posted by: NuttyGummy [Member] On: August 7, 2003 )

Hey
This is good, I like it a lot.

( Posted by: Brenron [Member] On: August 29, 2003 )

thanks
I wanted to thank you last two, NuttyGummy and Brenron, for commenting on this song. People keep surprising me with how they find my things months after they've been posted. I really appreciate the compliments.

( Posted by: Tyrant Monkey [Member] On: November 8, 2003 )





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