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My belligerent thoughts
About everyone around me
Then I look at you
And loving thoughts are all that I see
The attriction of my hate
Comes from the tender kisses of your mouth
Wanting to annihilate myself
Into an aesthetic wonder
Be meaningful to my life
And also to others
Antipathy that I feel towards myself
Wears away at my thoughts and dreams
Till all that is left
Is the indespensable thought
Of you and me


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