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..Then I set her free
And she never came back.

She was a wandering soul
Lost as I was,
But she was my Light,
Saving me from the Terror,
Releasing my nightmare
With one soft kiss..

Passionate moments
That slipped from my grasp
And I set her free,
For if she'd truly loved
She'd return

But she never did
Turning away
Without a glance..
My last and only light
Amused herself with the Devil

While I lost myself
Within the darkness
Once more.


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The following comments are for "Savior"
by Cryptic Rapture

Who is she?
Another nice piece of poetry. Divulge who elusive she is. Is it you? Last two lines are penetrative. Why don't you comment on my article any more.

( Posted by: Rakesh [Member] On: June 8, 2004 )

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