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Some say it happened instantly,
Left them breathlessly enthralled.
For others it came slowly.
Still others, like a fall.

It can happen in the day light,
When the sun shines bright.
On a cloudy rainy day.
Even in the dark of night.

So many different aspects.
Shown in many a different way.
To know its full expance,
Is very hard to say.

It appears in universal form.
This small four lettered word.
Engulfs the very heart of us,
Seems pretty much the norm.

Portioned in our stucture.
Sent to us from up above.
Brings each of us together,
This emotion we call love.

Wriiten by Lorraine-May 1st 2004

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Lorraine


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by Lorraine

Untitled Poem about LOVE
Great poem. It flows well and evokes universal feelings.

Thanks.

( Posted by: MaxiiJ [Member] On: May 2, 2004 )

Love
Maxii,Thanks so much for your nice comment. I feel I still have so much more to learn about writing.Your comment is very encouraging.I appreciate your input. My best lorraine

( Posted by: Lorraine [Member] On: May 2, 2004 )

LOVE- a four lettered word
One can write an epic about love…
Yet you wrote a very nice poem
You describe a great word of four letters that has endless meaning…not even books will satisfy to write about….
your attempt shows a bit of its great meaning

“Expense”…..
I enjoyed it …well done
All The Best
Fairgrace : )
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( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: May 3, 2004 )

Good love poem
Lorraine.

Nice poem. In the first stanza, the last two lines both have "others" maybe change one or the other (ouch).

Hard to write about love, but you did so very well.

( Posted by: captainkeyboard [Member] On: May 3, 2004 )

woooowwww!
I've been trying to use my poetry to explain love for so long but I have never been actually able to do it, but you did... and you did it so well. All I have to say is wow. I liked it :)

( Posted by: SuGapLuM1107 [Member] On: June 19, 2004 )





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