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My Mom
by deadlygiant (Member) - published: May 1, 2004
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Category - Poetry
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My mom was on drugs,
I tell you no lie,
if you think it was fun,
then you must be high,
the drug was called crank,
she was up all night,
she lost a lot of weight,
boy was she a sight,
she lost four hours in the bathroom,
while I banged on the door,
to her it was only minutes,
to me it was the end of the world,
three kids without a mother,
so if you think drugs are cool,
you better go back to school.

------
Jeffrey Lawson


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The following comments are for "My Mom"
by deadlygiant

swallowing hard
Jeffrey...what a powerful poem. You did the job of bringing the picture along with the pain.

Claire

( Posted by: clairesbest [Member] On: May 2, 2004 )





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