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I thought your eyes were blue
but you should see mine since
I had to turn you loose.
I turned to walk away
I said it was
nothing
but baby I was hoping
you could
see
I really wanted............ to stay
I just lied
because pride got....... in the way
I see now ..........
I should have run
the other way.


Its another blue Sunday morn-ing here in Ky,
I see the frost is still on the ground.
I guess I need to start another fire,
but my heart won't ever feel the warm
if I cant have your arms
around me.......some how.............
Well I met some friends last night in a bar,
they laughed while they
pat me on the back.
they said,Oh dont worry
times changes everything,
to count my lucky stars
to have my time again.
It just don't seem that way to me.
cause I count those stars every hour
while they all sleep..........
wonderin if you'll have time for me.

They keep tellin me.......
time's the healer of......everything.
I'll guess we'll see.......
If time really heals.......
then baby take
some time..........for me ............

We'll go back to the hills of Tennesee,
thats where love grew,
in the mist
of those
tall......... pines.
the first time I felt something
when I saw
my baby smile...............
I know love takes time
if you're gonna get it right,
so baby I was just hopin
you'd take some time from me
tonight.


I knew my life had changed
but now change...........
is....... killin me.......
We'll start a fire,
we'll hold each others
hand..............
walking in the rain
we can make all
our plans
again..............
Yeah,That's why I'm callin.
Can I ever see you,
baby, and I was just
wonderin, if you
could make this
time a change for me.

Well, its alright
no,no dont worry.
I know its killin you too.
but........................
If time
changes everything.........
then could you make this change
for me.
yeah, if time's the healer,
then take some from me
please.....................

Oh Im ok, yeah I can see you've
changed.
Where Iam?
Im at the store.
I was just waitin on
this change for me.
Ok bye baby, call me
some time...........if things change.







------
CoCo


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The following comments are for "Can You make this change for me"
by coco

claire
Thanks Claire,, I will ,,youre right

( Posted by: coco [Member] On: May 2, 2004 )

claire
I have the worst time writing it down how it sounds to me,,, I wished you could to,,it was from the heart,,but that doesnt help if others cant hear it,waaaaaa

( Posted by: CoCo [Member] On: May 3, 2004 )

Coco This is beautiful
I can hear it and it is the one great poem!!

( Posted by: ammaji [Member] On: May 28, 2004 )

ammaji
Im sorry, I did reply earlier to your comment, I suppose I did somthing wrong,because I see it isnt here,any way I check your writes often
your work is great reading

( Posted by: CoCo [Member] On: June 23, 2004 )





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