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This song is one I wrote on the piano. Yes I can play some piano, not the BEST at it, but I can play.

I look up..
Into the skies..
And I want time..
To pass us by..

I wonder when..
I will be free..
Free to live in..
Eternity...

*chorus*
And I look up
Look up to the skies
The skies for hope
For the love
The love I seek
Seek within your eyes

And I see...
Within your eyes..
The stars swirling..
Way up in the skies...

And I put my head
Against your chest
And I feel the love
The love of life..

And I look up
Look up to the skies
The skies for hope
For the love
The love I seek
Seek within your eyes

*Piano Solo now for nearly 1 minute*

And I look
Into the skies
And all that I see
Is your beautiful eyes

And I want
To walk away
Into eternity..
....
....
In the skies...

*the piano finishes it off with a soft few notes*


------
Itachi: You lack power....do you know why?
Sasuke: W-why..?
Itachi: Because you lack it....hatred.


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The following comments are for "Tonight I See"
by Wicked Voodoo

tonight
wow, i came across this song in the random reader and i can't believe how long its been posted and no one has commented on it. whats with that. i think its a great song. i dont know if you're around anymore wicked voodoo but kudos to you for this write. i would love to see new lyric posts from you. that section cries for talent such as you display in this.

jimmy g.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: November 5, 2004 )





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