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This is the First of three poems that i have written recently.

I look in your eyes
I can see what no other does
The gental kind person,
Everyone kinda sees him
but only i can truely see it
In the way You touch me
with your eyes
The way one of your looks can fill me
I can tell your mood
I can tell what you are thinking
I can see in your soul
When i look into those eyes
and I love what I see

-P.B. Hedwig

Blackbird sing in the dead of night. Take these broken wings and learn to fly.All your life.
-john lennon and Paul McCartney

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The following comments are for "Eyes"
by P.B. Hedwig

Well done P.B. It's a little sentimental for me, but it has a nice flow and it put me in a good mood. Now I won't kick my dog! heh, heh.

Good Job


( Posted by: Richard Dani [Member] On: February 15, 2002 )

poor dog
I liked the poem like parteepants said it does have a nice flow. Plus it is good that your poetry has such an effect on people-at least Parteepants dog will not be getting kicked this evening. Keep the poetry coming.

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: February 15, 2002 )

When looking within
I enjoyed the poem, though I do thought it a little sentimental for me (although that could just be my mood this time of night...who knows...)

Just wondering, if the whole piece is reflecting on you, and how you can see in side someone else, through their eyes... would you really use the word 'it' to describe your point?

Just a query, curious as I am.

Thank you for sharing :)

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: February 22, 2002 )

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