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I'm at ease
White room
No impurities

This is my perfection
My reflection
Staring back with sunken eyes

You're on the other side
Watch me like you would an animal
Look at me in discust

Should I pretend?
Should I believe you when you said
You'd always be here 'till the end?

A spider crawls across my cot
To where the foolish ones were caught

The curious fly stepped on the web
Now entantangled in silk
He's soon to be dead

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