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A lesser God am I,
a gathering of now's
(no past=no future)
to high voids I soar
And, like a failed poem
...nevermind

------
Stille


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by Dew Of Blood

Poem - A lesser God
Art thou a lesser god?
Canst thou say with certainty?
Dost thou embrace thy heavenly throne
With any clarity?
If so, indeed, a lesser god thou be...
Hell bound for all eternity.
If not, methinks thou be no god
For the lack of immortality
And if perchance thou art only Man
God's grace abounds toward thee!

( Posted by: MaxiiJ [Member] On: April 26, 2004 )





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