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This poem is about a band I used to love until they forgot about music and fans.

Everyone must know
it's all in the show
His name's Lars
he's from mars.
Next up is Rob
he's new to the job.
Then there's James
who just wants Gains!
Finally it's Kirk
just like a dirk.
Metallica they are
they want a fancy car.
They sold out
money it's about.
I'm disapointed
I misappointed.


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by rssbrs

:(
Sadly, I must agree...

( Posted by: Dew Of Blood [Member] On: April 29, 2004 )





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