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I want so much to be happy.
Just to let it go;
All my emotions and tears.
I want to be released,
Released from disappointment,
You
And
Life...
I wish for the courage
Or for the strength just to take myself,
Take me from the picture
Just to make you happy.
You make it seem
As if I took your happiness,
Love
And
My life.
You did it...


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The following comments are for "give me strength"
by reign

Holy Crap
That was freakin awesome, cheddar!

( Posted by: Button [Member] On: August 6, 2004 )

Reign
Isn't this what we always ask for for ourselves when love couldn't be reciprocated? To be set free. Because even if we already walked away, the hearts often stayed in the prisoner of love. And we often include life in our disappointment even when it's just love - because in a lover's point of view, life and love are just the same.

Thanks for this one.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: August 6, 2004 )





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