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Confusion sweeping through me,
Looking so closely
Yerning just to see,
The person you try to be.

Those barriers you need to break
Are becoming too strong
And to hard to take
Just let go, but still hold on.

Obstacles will disappear,
Worries will no longer be your fear,
Be the person you once knew,
Be yourself being you.

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The following comments are for "Mis-read"
by reign

thats a tight poem amanda, watch out tho ur emotions may lead me to believe that they're directed at me.

( Posted by: DEMONeyesBLUE [Member] On: April 25, 2004 )

Is it not?
Is it not directed towards you, Tom?

( Posted by: reign [Member] On: April 25, 2004 )

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