In english class we had assignent after reading some line poems of writing our own. After reading the Poem Fear by Raymond Carver one of our prompts were to make a line poem of what we wish people would say to us. And also our rendition of what we wouldve wrote if we were Raymond Carver.
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What I wish People would Say to me
I donít care what you look like.
I want to read your books.
Hello, Mr. President
I am sorry For all that I have done
Your suffering has helped others
Youíve changed the world
You will be Missed.
Fear that its just not the wind
Fear of being tricked
Fear that the night never ends
Fear of hate deep inside
Fear my mother will die
Fear that life is not worth it
Fear that some girl will play with my heart
Fear that the lighting will come to close
Fear that I will go unappreciated
Fear that I will always be alone
Fear that I will turn into my dad