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Shall I look behind a door? Will I find you standing with open arms?
I will only be saddened that you're not there with a smile on your face and the wind blowing through your hair.

Should I call out your name or search every corner, every building, to keep myself from going insane?
Where to look;I have no idea, but if I were to search my heart, I'm sure I would defiantly find you there.

I want nothing more than to have the things my soul richly yearns to have:
a home, a career, a loving and caring man, children, laughter, and happiness thereafter.
Where to look? Should I look beyond my tears that falls from my eyes to my cheeks to the cracks in my very soul? I am sure that is where you will find my remaining love.



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