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Playing my music is like my therapy
It takes me away from all the things I be
It takes me to a place where i am safe
It takes me so far away its like an open space
I can do anything i want with a trill or a note
I dont have to explain, And there isnt any doubts
People cant touch me and theres noone holding me down
And in this world its like heaven theres no such thing as frowns
I can skip on my treble clef until it bends
In this world the piano keys are my friends
I dont have a body i am just air
but the air its so fresh and bare
I dont have to worry of what I'll leave behind
Because this is my world and only mine
I go above the notes to almost like a castle
There is no work to do there isnt any hassle
Yes this is my world and it never gets dark or dims
But now the song is over, and reality begins


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The following comments are for "Music"
by Maestroe

only me and the music
I truely loved this peice, it is almost exactly how i feel, my world is sacred and i defend it with a passion, that was so beautiful

( Posted by: rincewind [Member] On: May 23, 2004 )

very very good Job,,, some emotions better understood more readily conducted with the pen many times over the tongue,,,,sounds of heart felt notes the precious beat of our captured souls set free,,,, this was nice to read,,,you can take a bow,,while I clap for u,,,(smile)

( Posted by: CoCo [Member] On: May 27, 2004 )

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