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A single tear could calm the rage
that’s blasting in my head
But instead I sit and whisper
And scare myself back into bed

A piercing blade escapes my lips
And sinks deep in your throat
I watch your eyes turn hollow
And drown inside love’s boat

Sharp pain seeping through my veins
Reminds me that I feel
Yet I ignore the hurt inside
Although it’s never been so real

I cover up the frown lines
And wipe away tear stained memories
I think that I am through with this
But it sneaks behind me and empties

Empties my soul
My will to go on
My hearts full desires
“Worth living for” gone

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The following comments are for "A Reckless Soul"
by B*Dizzle

Stained Memories
I enjoyed this read tremendously, especially the [4th] stanza,2nd line.
"And wipe away tear stained memories"
Thanks for this.


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: April 21, 2004 )

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