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Lack
of
bearing...
Wander mindscape
Creation.
Destruction.
Exploration, depth of touch...
Sensation consumes
Cry out,
absent sight...
Pain, surfacing to bright light.
Blink.
Blink.
Blink blink.
Pause.
Realism descends.
Scattering inspiration,
Droplets, ambrosia of genius
Fade.
Stability overwhelms.
Wake.


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- Adam Best

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The following comments are for "Unequilibriumness"
by De`esse

Thank you :)
I have to say I am glad to get a comment on this finally - thankyou for your words!!! I am really glad you liked it... the background inspiration for this was funny, but that's a story for another time :P

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: April 29, 2004 )

unequilibriumness
De`esse, I wonder why this one's written quite far back, have you been away? Like Jessica, I liked this one also. I have always wanted to have a use of the word equilibrium in a poem but couldn't find a way to, but here you used it aptly and justly. Thanks for this one. I hope you'll go back to posting new ones.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: July 27, 2004 )





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