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SUCLU YASAMAK

YASAM BURADA AZ
BANKA SOYGUNU CAM GIBI
YASANTISI KAN DOLU
YUKSEK SES DUSER
HADI! GIDELIM


YASAMIN RUHU, YASAMIN RUHU


YASLANMIS CEZA
KESKIN KARARLAR JURININ
YASAMIN KANUNU


PIS YASANTI, PIS SUC


BUGUN NE?
NE? NE? UZGUNUM?
OLUM GUNUNUZ

by: C. Renee Kelly 2004

Translation:

Criminal Life

Life here little
Bank as glass
Little life, full of blood
Go! Let’s go!

Sprit life, sprit life
Old criminal
Razor blade jury
Law life

Dirty criminal, dirty life
What day is it?
What? What? Pardon me?
Your blood day.

* I am learning turkish and there is no better way to learn then through using the words through poetry and writings. :)





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The following comments are for "Türkçe S,''iir , SUCLU YASAMAK ,CRIMINAL LIFE"
by LovesEssence

Turkic Language
LovesEssence;
I like this poem. It says alot about crime & life.
I've always been the type of person wanting to learn a new language. I'm quite impressive of you learning to write and speak words in *Turkish* I think it is nice to have more than one language. Although, I have [3] but *English* is my main language.

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: April 16, 2004 )

Thanks
Thank-you for you comments. My poem is very simple because my knowledge of turkish is very simple so far. :) My turkish friend said "You write like a child". I just laughed and explained to him that it was teaching me the words because I have to translate it. After this I must learn dutch so bare with me all.:)

*A famous turkish singer is Tarkan(kiss,kiss) he is so hot and his voice is so sexy. I recomend him for download to you all to get a taste of Turkey.

( Posted by: LovesEssence [Member] On: April 16, 2004 )

Smart

I like your invented way of learning a new language…
It is a smart idea..you will develop the language and the writing too
Yet , it would be more interesting if you started to learn mild words ; ) love song ….lol
Replace words of criminal , dirty , and blood with those of peace , love , gentel…: )

Regards ,
Fairgrace

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: April 16, 2004 )

I like it
I Liked it. It is not a simple as it appears. You chose an abstract way of presentation and that is fine. However I do agree that English version should have gone before Turkish.

( Posted by: Hederotic_string [Member] On: May 4, 2004 )





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