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I miss you more than you can believe.
I was a fool to think
you couldn't be taken away from me.
I crave your presence repeatedly.
I miss your pleasant tender smile,
and the way you would hold me so...passionately.
I will yearn for you eternally,
Till the day I am set free,
and once again I can feel your loving embrace.

Renea Roeder

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