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Remember daddy, when we would wrestle
till mommy got angry?
Daddy do you remember
when you were the monster
and I was little red riding hood?

Remember daddy when it was time to drive
and I burned your clutch
even though I tryed the best I could?
Daddy do you remember coming to my plays
at all the different schools?

Remember daddy how you get mad at me
for going to the garage
and playing with your tools?
Daddy do you remeber the day I left home
to finally experience all you had taught?

Remember daddy that I grew up
into a beautiful adult?
Daddy please remember no matter
how much older I get
I will always be your "Daddy's Little Girl".


------
Renea Roeder


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The following comments are for "Remember Daddy"
by flygirl1204

sweet
This was so sweet and sentimental without becoming syrupy. I liked it a lot. Great job!

( Posted by: amethyst [Member] On: April 14, 2004 )





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