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Lord why did you send me agony,
a boy who caused me pain.
Why did you send me lightning,
thunder, hail and rain.
Why did you send me glitter,
when it wasn't really gold.
Why did you give him arms,
if it's not me he would hold.
Lord why did you send me a heart,
if inside there is no love.
How can a person care,
if it isn't from above.
Why did you send me cookies,
that would make my stomach ache.
Why did you give me glass,
and you knew it would only break.
Lord why did you send me a smile,
when it turn into a frown.
Why is love like gravity,
it only brings you down.
Why must I be attached,
to those who just let go.
Why are my paths so bumpy,
how come they just don't flow.
Lord why cant you send me cake,
sweeter then apple pie.
Why cant you give me wings,
where I will always fly.
Why cant I meet with patience,
so maybe we have a chance.
Why cant we set the sun ,
and on the moon we will dance.

------
Mcherry



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The following comments are for "A LOVE PRAYER"
by pride

Pride
this is how you feeling and i feel it also there's an need for an asnwer from God why? why?
and mankind wants the answers.

And for mankind to GAIN the answers
they half to surrender their heart and soul
and learn the Truth in the things that mankind
tend to take for granted

( Posted by: heart and soul [Member] On: April 15, 2004 )





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