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Bring you forth out of my body
love you into being
you crawl across my surface
choking out my other children
like a virus
like a vine.

Scar my epidermis
slash into my depths
to suckle at my wounds.

Yes, and I will love you
breathe my breath upon you
hold you, awful offspring
as you steal away my soul.


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