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This was written about a couple of friends of mine.

Angelic




I see him touch you


I see his hand on your face
I see him push you


I turn my head in disgrace
I cannot stop this


I cannot make your life change
So many things


If i could i'd rearrange

I feel his touch


My mind just wonít let it go
All this emotion


But none that I can really show
Keep it all locked up


In a closet in mind
Hoping someday


To leave it all behind

I know your pain


Because Iíve been there before
Iíve felt the bruises


Iíve seen the many broken doors
Iíve tasted the tears


In the shower, in the bed
But theyíll never understand

I canít give you hope


Canít make it better for you
I can only sympathize


I can only be true
Who knows what tomorrow brings


Maybe change will come
All I can really say is


Donít give up until itís done




I know your pain


Because Iíve been there before
Iíve felt the bruises


Iíve seen the many broken doors
Iíve tasted the tears


Seen you wish you were dead
But theyíll never understand

Where are we now?


I guess iíll never know for sure
This mental sickness


Iím sure iíll never find a cure
Now iím alone


Simply wishing for the day
That i can breathe


And let this all just slip away

I know your pain


Because Iíve been there before
Iíve felt the bruises


Iíve seen the many broken doors
Iíve tasted the tears


In the shower, in the bed
But theyíll never understand
No, theyíll never understand

I know your pain


Because Iíve been there before
Iíve felt the bruises


Iíve seen the many broken doors
Iíve tasted the tears


Seen you wish you were dead
But now i understand













January 17, 2002










Words ** Music**










For our fathers










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The following comments are for "Angelic"
by E.G. Evans

re: Angelic (lyrics)
hurts me to read, but it's beautiful. thank you.

( Posted by: gothangelic [Member] On: January 23, 2002 )

Touching
E.G. Evens,
These lyrics are very touching and powerful. You express emotion very clearly through them.
Later,
Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: January 24, 2002 )

Thanks
I would like to thank you both. I appreciate both your honesty and your empathy. Thank you greatly.

E.G. Evans

( Posted by: E.G. Evans [Member] On: January 24, 2002 )

wow...
i think that was completely amazing. you have summed up the way alot of people feel, and that's a gift. i can see that you have a way of touching people. if you didn't know that, now you know :)

( Posted by: Veruca Salt [Member] On: January 26, 2002 )





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