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I know, that you are leaving
you put the sign out on the door
but something ,in my heart
wont let me see much more.

I know, that you need room to fly
and I know, it would be the best
just take a little part of me
where ever you decide to rest.....
this angel that I found I know
wasn't meant for me.
yeah,I realize now that I had,
clipped............ your wings.

just fly....... let me watch you soar.
just take..... my heart with you,
when you go...
I knew, when you grew stronger,
that this love affair wouldnt be ,
but something in me hoped
that this would never..................... end.

just fly....... let me watch you soar.
just take..... my heart with you,
when you go...
these hands...... they won't hold you
back no more.........
just fly......but please,
remember when you do
while I'm here missing you,
it was worth the pain, to have loved
then to have never loved at all.
when you hear me call your name.
just fly......

I guess its all................ in the game.
there's nothing left for us to do
yeah I guess, that I had hopes
to be the wind, that helped you sail,
but I know much to well
that your broken wings won't heal
just fly baby........let me watch you
spread............................ your wings.
and Fly, Fly ......................you can fly back
to these arms, again ,
if things aren't what you planned.
just Fly...........you're free again.



------
CoCo


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The following comments are for "Just fly"
by CoCo

Fly
Coco;
This is so personal and yet so beautifully written.

Blessings,

{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: April 12, 2004 )

just fly
Thanks Jeanne, you're always to sweet,,,it was wrote to someone I truly adore,,maybe some day they can know that,but for now I guess its not meant to be,

( Posted by: CoCo [Member] On: April 12, 2004 )

Just fly
This beautiful... i love how you give feeling through the images of an love one and how you half to let go of them and find their way through God and his angels.

As much we want to shelter them and protect them she half to let them grow and fly away but they will not depart.

( Posted by: heart and soul [Member] On: April 13, 2004 )

heart and soul
yes its hard when You love,but thats part of it,,loving enough to let go..and LOL I cant believe that I have the word (goar) I saw that and changed it and there it is again,,,blah!! Oh well it should read..... soar

( Posted by: CoCo [Member] On: April 14, 2004 )

beautiful
it seems things never work out how we want them to. i really liked this piece a lot. it takes great strength to let go. i admire that. beautiful imagery. great job!

( Posted by: ochimusha [Member] On: April 15, 2004 )

ochimusha
I appreciate your comment, thank you very much,,its hard to let go,But what was once said, If you love someone let them go,if they return then they are yours, if they dont then they never were.

( Posted by: CoCo [Member] On: April 20, 2004 )





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