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_Laziness_

Striving to avoid hard work
Only creates more:
Laziness loves irony.


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Spudley Strikes Again
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The following comments are for "Laziness"
by Spudley

The Witty Potato
I really like this, Spud.

I also enjoyed that little thing Pen always likes to do with haiku -- flipping the first and third lines, so that yours reads:

Laziness loves irony,
Only creates more:
Striving to avoid hard work.

Not quite the same, but it's a funny/ironic read both ways. Kudos.

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: April 11, 2004 )

Hard Work
Spud~
This is great. I enjoyed the read. I would love to see more Haiku by you.

Blessings,

{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: April 12, 2004 )

Yes.
Thanks all :)
Jess - yes it was. That last line was the hook that got me writing. I wanted that to be the last line, so I fitted the rest around it.
I was going to write something longer, but there was really only the one thing to say, so I fitted the form to it as best I could. (and besides... I was feeling lazy ;-))

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: April 12, 2004 )

good
neat and nicely to a point

( Posted by: johnlibertus [Member] On: April 13, 2004 )

1st Haiku I have ever really enjoyed!
I really enjoyed this. Every month I write some saying, quote, or thought on my calendar and read it everyday. I will be writing this one for the month of May. I have never been a fan of Haiku's, but I really loved this!

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: April 24, 2004 )

Too much for me to finish today.
Can't finish it all today, just too lazy.

Just kidding. Thought provoking as usual.

( Posted by: captainkeyboard [Member] On: May 2, 2004 )





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