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This pain is something unspeakable
It seems to crawl everywhere and through everyone
Yet this pain seems to linger in every part of me
My body is filled with it

I start to realize it's wonderfull
It numbs everything
I'm focused on the pain
Focused on the nothingness

The pain is something I only understand
It's something I want to never end
This pain crawls everywhere
This pain crawls through my body
This pain is my everything

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