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You didn't even say good-bye.

You left me here; not alone, but without you.

I miss you.

I think about you everyday and wonder just what I would have said had I known we'd never see each other again.

I would have probably tried to tell you not to go,
but how could I stop you?

I feel you near me, and yet you're so far away!
There are times when I want to scream and yell like a child of three,
but I know it won't help.

I really miss you.




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by queen of the hill

Crocus Uber Alles
What was it you said to me about, "Needing something positive in my life" ;) ?

Very cool poem Beautiful. Simple, as most of your are, but touching and powerful.

Elegant simplicity is a concept we are poorer for having lost and your work always reminds me of that.

Good to see more stuff from you

Love ya

Elliott

( Posted by: Enforced Bliss [Member] On: April 11, 2004 )





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