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You'll never know my pain
You'll never understand my tears
You can't see what's really going on
You won't look at the mirror

Too afraid to see the ugly truth
Too afraid to realize what's wrong
Walking in a dream-like state
Afraid to fall, Afraid to wake

Needing something to hold on to
Grabbing nothing, holding no one
Walking in this dream-like state
No one is going to wake you up

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The following comments are for "Never Know"
by disOrder

Never Know
I was very much connetcted by what you expressed and shown through your pain and emotions with this poem. until one goes through PTSD Disorder or mental disability they can or know how painful and hard you try to control all function it just takes even more energy.

It make one realize that the spirit is the drawing of ones strength to go on cause in reality God has all control of everything.

God bless

( Posted by: heart and soul [Member] On: April 10, 2004 )

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