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Gotta use the right words!
It has to look impressive!
This needs to sound good...
And have some sort of rhythm...
I hope they all like this!
There is so much hidden stress,
And the pressure that's unseen...
I could write ten poems,
Or maybe call them songs...
In simply ten minutes or less.
But quality over quantity,
Oh no, I'm writing sloppy,
And my punctuation is horrible,
I never did do well in english...
But the passion to write is there...
Find a way for them to realate,
Not enough time...it's too late!
I could continue this later,
But it may be a new flow,
Yet still I gotta go...
I'll wrap it up quick...
And still hope it's slick...
I never will read these over right away,
That purpose is saved for another day...
And this doesn't rhyme very much,
The scheme is off and so rough...
I hope I'm not losing my touch...
And if you liked this...
Thank you very much,
These are my thoughts as I write,
Trying my hardest...
To be able to say...
I am a poet!

------
LoNe)(WoLf


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